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Zemfir
2019-03-27

DesigndHolic, Your logo is too simple, a lot of fine lines.And the shape of the Burger is drawn very roughly..



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vianthedesigner
2019-03-27

for me, the concept is actually great, not bad, but I think the problem is in the outline strokes. You should remove it or otherwise make it thicker so the logo has more 'strong' look. And... make it more 'cute' and 'delicious' look.



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DesigndHolic
2019-03-27

thx bro, i will try to make it better ^_^



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mk4gfx
2019-03-27

Tbh, the face makes it a little silly and i am not sure what the idea is. why the inside of the burger is curved? And i think the sesame seeds should be on the top bun not the botton and yea thicker lines could make it better. Good luck



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Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-03-27

Hi! More like an s or a snake. It looks tasteless and unattractive. If you want to show the colors of the shadows, then do it more boldly. Transitions from dark sites to a little light, in General are a little visible. Even the layers of the Burger are not quite right.
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DesigndHolic
2019-03-28

https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019327432019-03-274352988s%20burger%202%20.jpg
hahahah... still decline, must try and try... learning and learning....



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Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-03-28

@DesigndHolic
No offense, but you have a clear problem with the selection of colors. The background looks terrible.



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Zemfir
2019-03-28

DesigndHolic, The color is very nasty, not like a Burger but something else..



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DesigndHolic
2019-03-28

@futurasan & @zemfir i agree with you sir, i have trouble with my color, can you help me how to improve my color sense??
sorry if my english so bad..



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Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-03-28

If you still feel bad colors, it is better to look on the Internet (find) a table (circle) of color compatibility.
In design colors play a very important role. If you do not feel the colors, then it is like not having a musical ear.



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Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-03-28

That's the first thing I saw. I think you'll understand.



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DesigndHolic
2019-03-28

@futurasan big thanks for you, actually i use adobe color wheel, but still don't get it..
i'll keep try and try... thx sir.. ^_^



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Lavrin UKR
2019-03-29

Hello DesigndHolic!

Your logo has potential but it needs better depiction.
Here are some ideas:

1) Get inspired by best S/burger/snake logos you can find on the net.
2) If that gonna be S or snake logo make it more rounded and twisted because at the moment it looks kinda a brick.
3) Make equal spacing for each burger slice/layer.
4) Pick some really tasty colors for every logo part.
5) Don't hurry, take your time to give it better look.


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