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aelsayed375
2019-04-12

i need your opinions and advices to improve this logo
https://imgur.com/PHjlSPv
i combine a woman head with "cup of hygeia" to suit pharmaceutical companies which produce cosmetics
thanks in advance.



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FuturaSan
2019-04-12

In order.
Very thin strands of hair (just like a thread).
The flower disappears into the background.
There's no contrast between a bowl and a girl.
The curvature needs to be smooth, beautiful.
The bowl merges with the girl's hair.
It is not necessary to apply different shades to the name (text). Moreover, they are almost the same.
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aelsayed375
2019-04-12

thanks @FuturaSan,
your advices are so valuable, i'll keep them in mind



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MRM1
2019-04-12

My opinion: background not good for the logo, I cant see easly the logo



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MRM1
2019-04-12

aelsayed375 Now thats good, this is only my opinion I hop that help you



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mk4gfx
2019-04-12

Hi @aelsayed, i think if the hair was wrapped around the cup like a snack it would look better. Good luck!



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aelsayed375
2019-04-12

ok, thanks @MRM1 @mk4gfx



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FuturaSan
2019-04-12

A flower needs to be done more and set it apart.
Strands of hair are still thin and go wrong.
The bowl should be larger and possibly of a different color.
But ... honestly I will say, there are a lot of graphic errors that cannot be so easily described (not much will be clear from the text).
You took up the execution of the logo, which is quite complicated for your level.
The most important rule is to start making the logo always in one color. If in one color the logo is clear and beautiful, then you can add colors to it.
Now if you paint your logo in one color, you get a regular spot. You can not make out what it is. It is by breaking this rule that you have a lot of mistakes.



DESIGNER
aelsayed375
2019-04-12

Hi @FuturaSan,
thanks for your time,
i followed @mk4gfx advices and made the hair wrapped around the cup like snakes and followed yours by making hair strands more thicker & the flower easier to be distinguished,
i tried to change the color of cup but i didn't find the appropriate color
for it TBH,
https://i.imgur.com/qnBKj7b.jpg
i know this logo is above my level but i won't get to higher levels by making easy logos only,



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-04-13

I showed only some mistakes (not all)
https://monosnap.com/file/ACoCMU2W8mQuiKv4rkzYWaI0wxzrDk

I repeat ... You need to start the logo in one color. If everything is clearly visible and understandable, then only then can it be given color.
See what happens with your logo if I fill it all in one color.
https://monosnap.com/file/QY0YeJ2CORvrMDt28aJSVobWaw81UQ



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Zemfir
2019-04-13

@aelsayed375, Always start creating a logo with a black and white version, as advised by @FuturaSan. And after the end you can already pick up colors, watch the whole thing.



DESIGNER
aelsayed375
2019-04-13

i'll do my best to correct those mistakes,
thanks @FuturaSan



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aelsayed375
2019-04-13

ok @Zemfir, thanks



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Zemfir
2019-04-13

@aelsayed375, good luck


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