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Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-04-15

It seems to me that the crown in the logo is too small. It needs to be made bigger, the lines are slightly thicker and the separation between objects is increased.



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fbastiardesign
2019-04-15

can you try to makes all gap or white line in the same dimension



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ajleroux
2019-04-16

Hi Imenk,

I think you need better harmony between the different parts. The horses and the shield and the crown feel like parts from different logos, not stylistically similar enough to compliment each other.



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mediarupa
2019-04-16

I'm not sure but the horse tails it's kinda weird.



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vianthedesigner
2019-04-17

do something with the tails



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Imenk
2019-04-17

thank u all guys ;)



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Zemfir
2019-04-18

@Imenk, I wish you successfully upload your logo



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KatInABox
2019-04-19

Agree wtih @ajleroux, one look and it looks like parts of this design came from different logos. The crown for example, if you compare the thickness of the strokes used for the crown with the thickness of the stroke used for the horse tail, they don't look the same. You opted for something majestic but then when it comes to the shield it's too simple. Maybe be consistent with the overall style of the logo then work on making the logo look complete instead of looking like bits and pieces were just grabbed from other logos.


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