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fbastiardesign
2019-04-17

Explanation:
We like this logo, but we think there is room for improvement. Please go over it again and make sure everything is as good as you can make it. Choose colors carefully, make sure the font is a good match for this design, zoom in on the details and tidy it up, check that things that are supposed to be aligned/symmetrical really are aligned/symmetrical, show it to a colleague or friend to hear what they think etc. We would love to see version two of this logo!

Thanks for uploading. We look forward to seeing more of your work!

https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019176492019-04-173316803Home%20Security.jpg



Can you give me advise to improve this logo, please?



DESIGNER
bildan02
2019-04-17

In Bahasa Indonesia: Bro coba lebar bagian putih kosongnya disamain kayaknya bagian putih perisainya keliatan lebih tipis.

In english: The white part of the shield looks thinner, try to make the same width with the other.



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-04-17

Improve the central part. Different line widths look bad. There are unfinished corners that are better rounded (to make smooth).
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DESIGNER
fbastiardesign
2019-04-17

thanks, guys
I will fix it (:



DESIGNER
immoodesign
2019-04-17

Agree with Bildan02 and FuturaSan...I would also try to scale-up the size of the shield as well.



DESIGNER
fbastiardesign
2019-04-17

Thanks @immoodesign



DESIGNER
Zemfir
2019-04-18

I join the tips above. And I would raise the shield myself higher, closer to the center.



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immoodesign
2019-04-18

+1 @Zemfir ...At least you could try both and choose what you think looks perfect.



DESIGNER
fbastiardesign
2019-04-18

thank you, for all advice from you mate (:
very happy with this forum



DESIGNER
vianthedesigner
2019-04-18

the concept is good to me, but do something with the shield


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