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ava19nauval
2019-04-19

Hi guys,

I really need your help to give any suggestion/advise for this logo.
I'm also wondering if font choosing is blunder

https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019342882019-04-184515497dragon-hexa-jpg.jpg

maybe you wanna know what is the red dot on the center. That's fire

Thankyou All



ADMIN
ajleroux
2019-04-19

Hi ava19nauval,

I think that red dot is the problem. It's not clear enough. And you might want to increase the white line of the mouth slightly so that it is not too thin - otherwise it is not practical for printing at small scale.



DESIGNER
ava19nauval
2019-04-19

@Ajleroux, I see... thank you for clarifying sir! :)



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DESIGNER
Zemfir
2019-04-19

I like the idea itself .. But in my opinion, too small details, nothing will be understood when decreasing.



DESIGNER
Zemfir
2019-04-19

@ava19nauval,In any case, I wish you to quickly make the necessary edits and put up for sale!



DESIGNER
Zemfir
2019-04-19

@МИМ1, Your first link does not open



DESIGNER
ava19nauval
2019-04-19

Thank you very much @Zemfir...

I think it's all clear enough and need go back to workshop soon

Really thanks for you guys :)

You are the best!



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-04-19

@ava19nauval
I join comments of other designers. Indeed there are very small elements. Also the concept itself is too general. Think of another idea.
Good luck to you!
http://prntscr.com/ne9tfg



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-04-19

Hi @MRM1
Friend I have been watching for several days now, how you suffer with this logo. It seems to me that your idea is not very successful and it is worth changing everything (to do something new).



DESIGNER
MRM1
2019-04-19

Thankyou Zemfir I didnt saw that, so here is the link:

https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y201946872019-04-183010125Letter-W-Shield.jpg

Thankyou FuturaSan ok I will try do new one, thats easy to try make it better



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-04-19

@MRM1
Very conspicuous are these places in the logo. The slits are too small.
They need to be made wider, like others
http://prntscr.com/nebiti

I also don't like these places. At the beginning they are of normal width...but then narrow. It doesn't look harmonious. The width between them should be the same.
http://prntscr.com/nebkze

In your logo font is better to choose such that the letter "A" was clearly in the middle. Or work on the shape and spacing of the letters. If the graphic part of the logo was round, it would be unnoticeable. And so, to shield its sharp end sets the necessary balance.
http://prntscr.com/nebmiu

Need to control the correct distance (logo-"BRAND"- "tagline goes here") In the screenshot I showed the correct distance. You need to omit (do below) below "tagline goes here"
http://prntscr.com/nebp0o

Good luck!



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-04-19

@ MRM1
And more...
These corners, I'd round it up a bit.
http://prntscr.com/nebs0m



DESIGNER
MRM1
2019-04-19

FuturaSan Thankyou for your great advices, I did it, I hope the logo will approved :)



DESIGNER
ava19nauval
2019-04-19

@Futurasan , Thank you very much for giving extra suggestion and your attention ...

Next, I will think more interesting idea for another design and become better at it!



DESIGNER
djjeepdesign
2019-04-20

really constructive comments, @FuturaSan. Good luck to all!



DESIGNER
djjeepdesign
2019-04-21

Congrats with approved! ;)



DESIGNER
ava19nauval
2019-04-23

@Djjeepdesign,
Thanks Buddy :D !



DESIGNER
ava19nauval
2019-04-23

And Many thanks to you guys! You are awesome !


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