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VladNem
2019-04-19

The torch in the form of the letter Y.

https://prnt.sc/ne8wfl

Give advice on how to improve the logo? or how to improve the fire?



DESIGNER
Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-04-19

Hello, Vlad!
Immediately see a lot of mistakes. Firstly, this is the improper use of the gradient. Try to create this concept without using a gradient.
Secondly, a different line width and space between objects is visible. The inside of the flame is invisible and angular. The figure itself is too elongated in height. Also there is no exact similarity with the torch.
http://prntscr.com/ne9e56



DESIGNER
Zemfir
2019-04-19

Nothing to add, @FuturaSan painted everything, showed.



DESIGNER
VladNem
2019-04-19

Ok, I'll fix it. And if the fire at all will be better? or then you need to add something else?



DESIGNER
Zemfir
2019-04-19

Now in your logo, the so-called "fire" does not look like a flaming flame. Look on the Internet for the work of other designers, as they showed it ..



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Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-04-19

I think that the fire at the torch should be bigger.



DESIGNER
immoodesign
2019-04-19

+1 @FuturaSan and @Zemfir.... I don't know but what I feel after seeing your logo looks more like 'Fleur-de-lis' rather than a torch/fire...Change the fire which can make it feel like its flaming something at the top of the torch.


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