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Opandri
2019-04-28

Hello, i'm a newbie here.
Please give me some advice, this is my first logo that got Admin Feedback : Small Improvements Needed. Before this one, the yarn is curved downwards, then I changed it to curved upwards. Another improvement i did was on the shoulder, which i changed to not be stiff. After that, it changed to be my logo is not on standard. I upload it about 2 or 3 times.

https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019338252019-04-274196783Tailor%20Logo.jpg



DESIGNER
vianthedesigner
2019-04-28

I think you should do something with the wrapped rope in the downside, it makes an annoying contrast on the logo



DESIGNER
Brandmaistro
2019-04-28

The lower part of the line looks unintentionally like a dog's turd (sorry for that) :-O

If I were you, I would also make the space between the spirals / curves larger, this could possibly stick together on a small size.



DESIGNER
Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-04-28

@Brandmaistro)))))
@Opandri, Yes, indeed, the bottom part is very unfortunate.
It seems to me that there would fit a good ball of thread.



DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-04-28

Overall, i make a mistake at the lower part. Actually I once changed the lower part into a ball of thread, but the shape looks less suitable with the concept of the logo. Maybe i have to practice more to make it suitable. And yes, i just realized that the space between the spirals is so narrow.
Thank you so much @vianthedesigner @Brandmaistro and @FuturaSan , you guys are so kind.



DESIGNER
Lavrin UKR
2019-04-28

You can not only redraw the lower part with a ball, you can, maybe create a better idea for your T-shirt, because that zigzag line on the shirt reminds me stomach and intestines.

Just take a pencil and make a couple of sketches on paper.



DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-04-28

Ah i see, now it looks terrible for me :D
Thanks for your advice @Lavrin UKR, i'll do something with that.


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