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aelsayed375
2019-04-28

hi,
i want your opinion & advice to improve this :
https://i.imgur.com/7Mufxb4.jpg
it's a gorilla face with a butterfly,
thanks.



DESIGNER
ApplexDesign
2019-04-28

Nice concept.
The right contour of the gorilla's fur disturbs me.
I would try to remove it and leave the image clean.



DESIGNER
aelsayed375
2019-04-28

hi ApplexDesign,
many thanks for your advice, i'll try it



DESIGNER
Lavrin UKR
2019-04-28

1) Poor font, gorilla definitely needs stronger and more 'bulky' font.
2) In my view the butterfly silhouette is hardly recognizable.
3) Put the nostrils a bit closer to each other and give them thicker line.
4) Make bigger/wider mouth.
5) I'd rather not apply roundness to the line on the left, try it with sharp corners.

P.S. I think, it's better to focus here on just gorilla idea than gorilla-butterfly.



DESIGNER
aelsayed375
2019-04-28

ok, thanks @Lavrin UKR



DESIGNER
Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-04-28

Hi @aelsayed375
Pay attention to too small details. Many of the contours on the face of a monkey will disappear when the logo is reduced. Will not distinguish the face. You must always remember that your logo can be used on different media (for example, on a business card).
The graphic part of the logo is incorrectly centered in relation to the text. Also, why such a large distance between the text and the monkey?
The face of a monkey is very similar in shape with a butterfly. Is this part of the idea?
Fur contour can be made fatter and apply sharper corners.
Good luck to you!
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DESIGNER
Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-04-28

While I was writing a recommendation, @Lavrin UKR managed to say everything))



DESIGNER
aelsayed375
2019-04-28

hi @FuturaSan,
thanks for your advices,
..
yes,it's a part of the idea



DESIGNER
Lavrin UKR
2019-04-28

@FuturaSan but you managed to illustrate everything:))
Sometimes advice-coincidence happen in the world)


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