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ajleroux
2019-05-02

Hi AGdesign,

When you see the "small improvements needed" decline reason, there's usually something in the design that we think doesn't look quite right. If you then respond by adding/removing details you are probably not addressing the problem. Better to work with what you have and fine-tune, test alternatives etc.

Problems that I see:
1. Shouldn't the buckle point to the right?
2. The belt isn't centered. The lowest point in the curve of the belt should be centered below the lowest point of the tie.
3. The spacing doesn't look right. Why is the space below the knot bigger than the spaces on either side of it?
4. I know it is a minimalist face with bow tie eyes, but I think you should find a way to make the eyes a little softer/friendlier. That will make it easier to sell.

I hope that helps :)



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AGdesign
2019-05-02

Hi Aileroux,

Thank you for your time and feedbacks :)
There is corrected logo:
https://imgur.com/dG1hbmE

then a version without highlights:
https://imgur.com/bPXnvid
re 1. the buckle down was intended to create a tongue giving the smile more "sexy" look but if this not worked then I have restored its right direction.



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Zemfir
2019-05-02

Hello. Please tell us about the idea of ​​the logo and what does it mean? I can not understand.



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AGdesign
2019-05-02

Hi Zemfir,

This is combination of mens fashion attributes put together as smiling face. Bowtie eyes, tie nose and a curved belt as a smile. Logo intention is: our mens fashion products will make you happy.



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ava19nauval
2019-05-02

I have been thinking like what does power button do right there.



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vianthedesigner
2019-05-02

@AGdesign, I don't understand with the power button there, if it supposed to be a zipper, then I think you should edit that 'power button'



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mediarupa
2019-05-03

I think you need to adjust "the buckle" a little bit. Some of our friends think that's a button power.



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Cope
2019-05-03

You should generally abandon all designs without concept/ideas behind it. After all, someone needs to buy and use that logo. Imagine you've been given a logo brief for a company in a certain industry and start from that. Don't go and just randomly combine elements without a purpose.

Btw, the buckle is in a different color.




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FuturaSan
2019-05-03

Wow @Inger, where did you get such a rich knowledge of sexual fetishism?)))))



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Gregory M
2019-05-03

Norway apparently :D



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Zemfir
2019-05-03

Smile)))


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