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Opandri
2019-05-05

Hello everyone :)
Please give me some advice to improve my logo.

This is one of my logos that got declined. The first time i upload it, its just have 3 colors, after that i change it to be more colorful. And then i got feedback from other designer that the problem is the color profile, then i make it into rgb color for jpg and cmyk for .eps. But its still got declined for multiple problems. I've left this logo for a while, meanwhile i make another logo, hoping to find the problem when I see it again. But i still cant find it.

This is the first time i upload it
https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019338252019-04-293270954Happy%20Hand%20Shop%20Logo.jpg

and then this (this time i got feedback from other designer on LG)
https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019338252019-04-303827198Happy%20Hand%20Shop%20Logo.jpg

and this the last time i upload
https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019338252019-05-013141904Happy%20Hand%20Shop%20Logo.jpg



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-05-05

Hi, @Opandri!
What does your logo mean?
What did you want to portray?
If it's a palm ... then 5 fingers are clearly missing.



DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-05-05

@FuturaSan
My logo describes a smile on the thumb, a cart on the pinky, and the rest fingers is for the products.
So the problems is on the shape, not on the colors? Why the 5 fingers are clearly missing? Please let me know
I mean is to make palm that combined by those shapes, and i want to make it playful, i mean cheerful. I deliberately made the fingers look curved, to avoid its gonna looks like a ban sign.



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-05-05

There are 5 fingers on the palm. And you have only 4.
People on earth have five fingers on their limbs (there are exceptions, but rarely). D



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-05-05

I have a friend, he works as a carpenter (saw is a dangerous job), so he has 4 fingers on one hand.



DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-05-05

Ah, so it looks like a teenage mutant ninja turtles fingers :D. Is it the thumb? If it yes, do i have to make it a little longer or bigger, on the right side.



DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-05-05

@FuturaSan I got it, attempt to not to make a logo with gives mocking or offense meaning. Sorry for my inadvertent, I don't mean to do that.



DESIGNER
FuturaSan
2019-05-05

You just need to make a palm more pronounced. Now it is not immediately clear, even for me (and I am a creative person). Buyers will not see a hand there.



DESIGNER
Bungyudho
2019-05-05

The shape is too abstract to be understood as a hand and a smile. Keep the spirit ✊✊



DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-05-05

Thank you so much for your feedback @FuturaSan , i will do something with the palm shape

And thanks to you too @Bungyudho , after i see your logo, i will focus on the palm, then on the other shapes

Hopefully it will work this time



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DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-05-05

Thanks for your help @ApplexDesign , you guys are doing this far just for helping us (newbie). Actually it's kinda different with my concept, because i want to show the full shape of palm, but i really appreciate it. After i see my design changes from you, now i'm pretty sure with the new idea i sketch before.



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DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-05-05

@Zemfir Thank you for showing me some picture that similar, looks like i have to add something more on this palm.



DESIGNER
ava19nauval
2019-05-06

Hi Opandri, Zemfir was right.

The logo that you make will be difficult to distinguish because it resembles each other. Even though the logo is good, simple, the design is neat, and moreover I love the simple ones. But the concept has been flying everywhere on the internet now. Must add at least one more object to make it more unique



DESIGNER
Opandri
2019-05-06

Yeah, if @Zemfir didn't show me those similar designs, i will not know. And thanks to you too @ava19nauval

wish me luck



DESIGNER
Gregory M
2019-05-09

Sure you didnt know buddy... by accident you made exact same logo. What is the chance of that happening i wonder?



DESIGNER
Freeman
2019-05-13

very abstract ... this logo is not easy to recognize ... very mysterious


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