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CrisDesignArt
2019-05-07

Hello. I'm here to stress you out again with some advice on how to improve my very first logo on logoground. If that's gonna be the case.

The logo is called "Happy Kitchen" and it constains the main tools used, where the knife is hugging the spoon & fork, all being placed in a house/building, where the spoon and fork are the pillars.

This was 1st version:
https://imgur.com/a/BWh8MnI

2nd version:
https://imgur.com/a/z2QUoed (Here I added a plate which apparently was a bad idea)

This is the latest version of it that got declined due to small improvements needed:
https://imgur.com/a/FVBFva5

In the last pic I really made sure everything is lined up perfectly and simetrical but it wasnt enough it seems. Any idea on how to improve it's
really appreciated.



DESIGNER
kassymkulov
2019-05-07

Hi.
The handles seem to be too wide, compare them to actual kitchen tools and you'll notice that. Right now they look like plastic tools for kindergarteners.



DESIGNER
Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-05-07

Reduce your logo and see if it will be visible and understandable. The lines are too thin for the logo.
Also try adding uniqueness. The idea is not bad, but kitchen tools look too general.



DESIGNER
CrisDesignArt
2019-05-08

Thank you for advice. Will try to improve it.


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