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Bungyudho
2019-05-18

in the first two designs, I saw the composition of the lines is too complicated and unbalanced.



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Bungyudho
2019-05-18

the third design does not clearly describe what the logo is.



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Denmaz48
2019-05-18

for the first two logos, the space bar is too thin, try to make it wider.



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kassymkulov
2019-05-18

I find the colors to be problematic, your blue isn't working with black background. Why not try a white logo (or brighter blue)? For example in the first logo the text is more visible than the mark.
Or use white background.

The first logo looks like πM...
In the second maybe try removing text overall.
The third is not clear what it is, bird and a fire? It needs more artistic approach.
And as Denmaz48 suggested, try to make the shadows wider so that they're distinguishable at small sizes.



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ava_nauval
2019-05-19

@UburzBa

Just like denmaz48 said, too thin space from all of them. If you reducing the size of these logos. You only found these details will disappear and merge into one spot, united without gaps so that the intent of its own logo is not all conveyed because the problem itself is stuck with small details.



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ava_nauval
2019-05-19

And the last one,

https://prnt.sc/nqfs54
the proportion is not balanced or gap is not neat.

Hope that helps



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UburzBa
2019-05-19

thank you all the suggestions, hope this works😅



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designabot
2019-05-20

First logo is a good start but could be fine tuned and elements balanced 'better'. I think the whole thing would be cleaner without gradients and maybe presented on a white b/g.

The second logo is the sharpest. I would either put 'company name' much lower to help the emblem breathe.. or remove text altogether. The actual design is solid.

The third option looks a bit too abstract? Maybe play around with it so the elements/ideas within the mark are more defined.


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