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suryadi18
2019-07-25

Admin Feedback: Small Improvements Needed.
Explanation:
We like this logo, but we think there is room for improvement. Please go over it again and make sure everything is as good as you can make it. Choose colors carefully, make sure the font is a good match for this design, zoom in on the details and tidy it up, check that things that are supposed to be aligned/symmetrical really are aligned/symmetrical, show it to a colleague or friend to hear what they think etc. We would love to see version two of this logo!

please help to enter this logo for improvement
https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019372042019-07-252862311tiger%20logo-01.jpg



DESIGNER
Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-07-25
Edited 2019-07-25 by FuturaSan

Hello!
Unfortunately, your logo is very weak. We see you are not familiar with this style. In the logos of this style, there must be harmony in the lines (you have from different angles). You should also increase the thickness of the lines.
Carefully read similar logos.
At this point, chaos is tracked in your lines.
http://prntscr.com/ojxvpg
Keep track of the distance between the lines. The lines must be the same thickness. Also the general form does not have the correct circle.
Good luck!



DESIGNER
suryadi18
2019-07-25
Edited 2019-07-25 by suryadi18

okay thanks futura san with the input and help, I will try to correct the line errors



DESIGNER
ava_nauval
2019-07-25
Edited 2019-07-25 by ava_nauval

Hi suryadi,

the width of negative space is not consistent. Most prominent is the right side of his nose. besides, his mustache must be parallel to the line of its mouth.

Hope that helps :)



DESIGNER
suryadi18
2019-07-25

okay thanks ava_nauval with input and help, I will try to fix the inconsistent parts



DESIGNER
suryadi18
2019-07-26

Admin Feedback: Small Improvements Needed.
Explanation:
We like this logo, but we think there is room for improvement. Please go over it again and make sure everything is as good as you can make it. Choose colors carefully, make sure the font is a good match for this design, zoom in on the details and tidy it up, check that things that are supposed to be aligned/symmetrical really are aligned/symmetrical, show it to a colleague or friend to hear what they think etc. We would love to see version two of this logo!
Thanks for uploading. We look forward to seeing more of your work!

please help to enter this logo for improvement
https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019372042019-07-254681700tiger%20logo-01.jpg



DESIGNER
Dmitriy Dzendo
2019-07-26

Unfortunately you did not hear what you were told. You have the same mistakes that I reported to you. You did not fix anything, just made the lines thicker.



DESIGNER
ava_nauval
2019-07-26

You haven't fixed what FuturaSan and I said before.



DESIGNER
Design Star
2019-07-27

You should need to improve if you need the logo approved.
They are properly guide you. Now it ups to you.
Best of luck



DESIGNER
fbastiardesign
2019-07-27

Logonya udah bagus bro. Tinggal perhatikan kerapiannya dan presisinya aja. Coba buat satu sisi dan di mirror.

"semangART"



DESIGNER
Gregory M
2019-07-27

You could atleast make the color choice slightly difeerent than an already sold front facing tiger head design. Copying directly wont make yours any likelier to sell, even tho colors are not copyrightable people can see you try to imitate some other brand and that lowers your chances of success.



DESIGNER
suryadi18
2019-07-27

gregory m, I've changed a number of improvements and colors https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019372042019-07-264972643tiger%20logo-01.jpg



DESIGNER
amx
2019-07-27

really mate... I truly admire your persistence... I do!



DESIGNER
suryadi18
2019-07-27
Edited 2019-07-27 by suryadi18

I will continue to try bro amx, but this logo is still in the process of waiting bro


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