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ava_nauval
2019-08-12

Hi harry2000

1. Too many wrong here. Bad design, sorry. Maybe the idea isn't bad but the execution is poor.

2. I do not know what to say about the second design. To be honest, I don't think if the negative form of space in birds would fit between the crevices of the feathers. Maybe the feathers detail are not bad but now you are adding a new problem there. Gradients, proportions, sizes, strokes, etc. do not work together to provide harmony. My suggestion is that you need to build a simpler design with a bright idea. Don't be tempted by gradient or shiny colors. And follow the instructions from this page

https://www.logoground.com/get-logos-approved.php

It really will help you a lot

hope that helps



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Gregory M
2019-08-12

Is your monitor any good? There are so many obvious issues starting with the color scheme. The gradients between objects is not seamless. The composition is bad. the color choice is terrible. The design is barely visible. I see the feathers have been copy-pasted and the linework isn't very good, the lines don't flow. The lines are of inconsistent thickness too and there is some weird glitching in the middle, the lower feather part doesn't have a line stroke around it while everything else does.



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CarlosMedina
2019-08-12
Edited 2019-08-12 by CarlosMedina

Man I think I commented on the first logo "don't disrespect the graphic design" when I declined it in the reviews.. I saw a lot like those this sunday when I was reviewing, a lot.
One does not simply wakes up in the morning and thinks "mmm I'm going to be a graphic designer today" Get prepared, go step by step into theories and practice. If you can't afford a college, there's ton of free material on the web to learn. I hope my words weren't too harsh.


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