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mz MAN
2019-08-16

hello all.
. suggestions for my design that were rejected on the grounds that there was room for improvement.

https://www.logoground.com/uploads6/dv6y2019297142019-08-153821885r%20berontak.jpg

thanks



DESIGNER
kassymkulov
2019-08-16

The text appears to be too distracting, maybe try without the text or make it smaller.
Maybe try to draw the leg of R the same way you did with inner part, lines starting from the left, going down and forming the leg.



DESIGNER
ava_nauval
2019-08-16

@mz MAN

I think text was too close to the mark and title size is little big. Maybe 2:1 is good proportion for mark and text space. Just resize all texts down little bit.

Hope that's help



DESIGNER
Gregory M
2019-08-16

Are you sure its not because the shape of the R or P has been seen elsewhere? If not, perhaps its the clash between blue and red. You can see theres a lot of artifacting and eye strain in between blue and red. Blue and red shouldn't touch especially when they are medium to highly saturated.



DESIGNER
mz MAN
2019-08-16

Yes, thanks for the advice.
.and maybe @ Gregory M is right, there is a clash between blue and red. I will also change the font.



DESIGNER
mz MAN
2019-08-16

Yes, thanks for the advice.
.and maybe @ Gregory M is right, there is a clash between blue and red. I will also change the font.


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